Feedback from our first edit and the changes we made in response

After finishing our first edit we were all given the task to present our music videos to the rest of the class, collect feedback and use that feedback to improve our music video. Given the fact that our main target audience for our music video is adolescents, their feedback will be very helpful. 

After reading these feedback sheets and taking all the comments into consideration, it helped us understand how to improve and build on what we have created. The constructive criticism we received was that there weren't enough transitions and performance shots. My partner and I took this into account and added more performance shots.